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HapplyMarried505
Super Diva


Posts: 250
From: New Mexico

Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 04/05/2006 01:00 PM
You Are

You are the sweet scent that drifts upon it
You are not the sounds that I hear,
You are the music of my life
You are not the food that I need,
You are the nourishment of my soul
You are not my will to survive,
You are my reason for living
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It is with you that I triumph over the challenges in my path
It is your partnership that will lead me to the fulfillment of my dreams
It is your friendship that guides me as I grow and learn
It is your patience and wisdom that calms my restless nature
It is through you that I know my true self
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I cherish you
I do not need you
I choose you
I choose you today in witness of all the people who love us
I choose you tomorrow in the privacy of our hearts
I choose you in strength and weakness
I choose you in health and sickness
I choose you in joy and sorrow
I will choose you, over all others, every day for all the days of my life
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DaughterRhonda
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Posts: 7635
From: Jersey City, NJ

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 04/05/2006 02:31 PM
Beautiful poem Happy. Thanks for sharing.
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Delight yourself in The Lord & He will give you the desires of your heart!Ps 37
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PureBliss
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Posts: 988

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 04/05/2006 08:44 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Thanks for sharing
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FutureMsLee
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Posts: 499
From: Dream of Californication

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 05/29/2007 01:44 PM
this poem is missing the first line

You are not the air that I breathe,

You are the sweet scent that drifts upon it

You are not the food that I need,

You are the nourishment of my soul

You are not my will to survive

You are my reason for living

It is with you that I experience the wonders of the world

It is with you that I triumph over the challenges in my path

It is your partnership that will lead me

to the fulfillment of my dreams

It is your friendship that guides me

as I learn and grow

It is your patience and wisdom

that calms my restless nature

It is through you that I know my true self

I do not take you for granted, I cherish you

I do not need you, I choose you

I choose you today in witness of all the people who love us

I choose you tomorrow in the privacy of our hearts

I choose you in strength and weakness

I choose you in health and in sickness

I choose you in joy and sorrow

I will choose you, over all others,

every day for all the days of my life
I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride; so I love you because I know no other way. ~ Pablo Neruda
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MsBoston
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Posts: 688
From: Boston, MA

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 05/29/2007 07:04 PM
yeah I read it, and it seemed to be missing something. Love the lyrics though
Thanks Future. BTW, who would be the author of this poem?
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SeptBride
Vibride Queen


Posts: 2799
From: New Jersey

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 05/30/2007 10:38 AM
Nice poem. I would change one line though, but I don't know what I would change it to. I don't want my man to think I don't need him.
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FutureMrsKeepUp
Vibride Queen


Posts: 1846
From: Chicago, IL

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 07/06/2007 09:42 AM
FutureMsLee I do not need you, I choose you


I know exactly what the author (whomever that is) means by this line. My FH and I went through a thing b4 because I am the 1st woman that he's been with that hasn't "needed" him financially. I kept telling him that its better to be with a person that chooses (or wants) to be with you vs a person the "needs" you. Once that needy person figures out they can do things for themselves or finds someone else who supplies their needs a little better they'll be gone. That one the chose you - they'll be there because there's no other place they WANT to be.
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SeptBride
Vibride Queen


Posts: 2799
From: New Jersey

Re: Poem I Throught You Ladies Would Like
Posted on: 07/06/2007 04:08 PM
Thanks for dissecting it. It makes more sense now.
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